Ar Tonelico: An ordinary life

**Dexas** · Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 6:34 pm Post subject:

Alternate universe~nya. My life sorta felt empty without writing a fic every day, so I made this one for fun.

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Gadessa · Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 7:08 pm Post subject:

Dexas wrote:

Alternate universe~nya. My life sorta felt empty without writing a fic every day, so I made this one for fun.

it's good to hear that you're into this
well, at least I'm following this from the start ^^
anyway...will there any new original characters?maybe taken from original reyvateils or vanguards thread?

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**Dexas** · Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 7:12 pm Post subject:

Gadessa wrote:

Dexas wrote:

Alternate universe~nya. My life sorta felt empty without writing a fic every day, so I made this one for fun.

it's good to hear that you're into this
well, at least I'm following this from the start ^^
anyway...will there any new original characters?maybe taken from original reyvateils or vanguards thread?

No, it's ended already~nya. This was just a one shot chapter that won't be continued.

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Gadessa · Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 7:23 pm Post subject:

Dexas wrote:

No, it's ended already~nya. This was just a one shot chapter that won't be continued.

eh?
that's too bad...

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wizzardx · Servant of God Joined: 13 Feb 2009 Posts: 259

Another chapter, well done Smile

I liked the references to the first 2 chapters at the start. Is Cantor a Mana Khemia character?

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**Dexas** · Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:13 pm Post subject:

wizzardx wrote:

Is Cantor a Mana Khemia character?

Nope. An original character from me~nya.

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H@_P3 · Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 3:58 am Post subject:

Nice chapter Dexas-san~!
It really has a peaceful feeling in it.
So tranquil~~...

And lol at Bourd being a dumb janitor for the school when Falss is already dead. XD

And isn't that Cantor the original Reyvateil in your fic that sings the mind controlling hymn? How did she ended up here?

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**Dexas** · Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 4:06 am Post subject:

H@_P3 wrote:

And isn't that Cantor the original Reyvateil in your fic that sings the mind controlling hymn? How did she ended up here?

Think about it for a few minutes~nya. The ONLY difference in this universe is that Falss wasn't there to screw over everyone's lives.

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Eijigawa · Joined: 19 Mar 2009 Posts: 57 Location: Ar Tonelico academy

Dexas wrote:

Think about it for a few minutes~nya. The ONLY difference in this universe is that Falss wasn't there to screw over everyone's lives.

So, basically this an "what if" world eh...... what if that most despicable man ever existed never cracked the code eh.......Nice one!!!! I wouldn't mind reading a fic of alternate story telling of your fic. LOL at the names given to Bourd, finally a parody from DBZ.

But seriously, when the part where leard-sensei was gonna introduce a transfer student, I thought it would be for sure is Aurica!!!! You even make it seems that the adventure he had in your fic seems like a dream to Main.

Question time:

1. Does Aurica attends the same school in this alternate telling?

2. So, Misha is in love with Lyner eh? I assumed you must have choosed Misha route in the game then.

3. Does Freesha attends different school or different grade only?

4. Since Mir wasn't in danger this time, Ayatane wouldn't be created right?

5. What happen to Kruche? Still trying her best to gain gald?

6. Assumed Ayatane never existed, does Main Godspell still attends the tournament?

7. If Main did entered the tournament regardless of Ayatane's existence, does Lyner took Freesha's place in the tournament?

8. Does Shurelia have feeling towards Lyner or Main?

9. So Main won't call Mir as Jakuri anymore?

10. No epic Aurica's salvation rescue from Main in this fic?

11. So, as Misha in now lover dovey with Lyner, does it cause Main now become the lazy bum who need to be woke up?

12. *To all forum members* Which you prefer to wake you up, Freesha or Misha?

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TerrorofDeath · Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 6:20 am Post subject:

Eijigawa wrote:

12. *To all forum members* Which you prefer to wake you up, Freesha or Misha?

frankly i would prefer to wake up early myself and wake them up for a change...=P

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Eijigawa · Joined: 19 Mar 2009 Posts: 57 Location: Ar Tonelico academy

TerrorofDeath wrote:

frankly i would prefer to wake up early myself and wake them up for a change...=P

Then you would raid their drawer and took a smell and lick thier panties???!!! Like Main did to Misha in chapter 1.

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**Dexas** · Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 6:39 am Post subject:

1. Does Aurica attends the same school in this alternate telling?

We'll never know. hehehe.

Yeah, she will eventually. But they won't be as close, since the airport event wouldn't have ever happened.

2. So, Misha is in love with Lyner eh? I assumed you must have choosed Misha route in the game then.

Yeah, something like that.

3. Does Freesha attends different school or different grade only?

It's the same school. Just different grades.

4. Since Mir wasn't in danger this time, Ayatane wouldn't be created right?

Yeah, Ayatane won't exist, since there's no Falss to make machines go haywire.

5. What happen to Kruche? Still trying her best to gain gald?

Yeah. She's probably out of town being a bounty hunter.

6. Assumed Ayatane never existed, does Main Godspell still attends the tournament?

Nope. He never had the motivation to learn swordsmanship, since there's no danger out there. So chances are, he'll never get to meet the friends he makes at the tournament.

And since Misha likes Lyner, her fanclub will never have kidnapped Main. So he'd never had met Chroah either.

7. If Main did entered the tournament regardless of Ayatane's existence, does Lyner took Freesha's place in the tournament?

The whole gang would probably just be spectators on the sidelines. Shurelia and Mir would probably be in the tournament, and with their skill, they'd probably be the winners.

Then again, they wouldn't have the elder Godspell for motivation to win. So who knows?

8. Does Shurelia have feeling towards Lyner or Main?

hehehe. Secret.

9. So Main won't call Mir as Jakuri anymore?

Nope. He'll call her Mir.

10. No epic Aurica's salvation rescue from Main in this fic?

Nope. Just an everyday, normal relationship. She'll probably not fall in love with Main, or will never realize that she does.

11. So, as Misha in now lover dovey with Lyner, does it cause Main now become the lazy bum who need to be woke up?

Freesha's there to wake him up every morning.

12. *To all forum members* Which you prefer to wake you up, Freesha or Misha?

I'd prefer Freesha, since she's my cute little imouto. Plus, it was Main who woke up Misha every morning in the original timeline, not the other way around~nya.

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TerrorofDeath · Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 6:43 am Post subject:

Eijigawa wrote:

TerrorofDeath wrote:

frankly i would prefer to wake up early myself and wake them up for a change...=P

Then you would raid their drawer and took a smell and lick thier panties???!!! Like Main did to Misha in chapter 1.

...i'm no pervert...

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Eijigawa · Joined: 19 Mar 2009 Posts: 57 Location: Ar Tonelico academy

TerrorofDeath wrote:

Eijigawa wrote:

TerrorofDeath wrote:

frankly i would prefer to wake up early myself and wake them up for a change...=P

Then you would raid their drawer and took a smell and lick thier panties???!!! Like Main did to Misha in chapter 1.

...i'm no pervert...

Sorry if I accidentally offended you, I was just making fun of your statement there.

Please forgive me.

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TerrorofDeath · Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 7:16 am Post subject:

Eijigawa wrote:

TerrorofDeath wrote:

Eijigawa wrote:

TerrorofDeath wrote:

frankly i would prefer to wake up early myself and wake them up for a change...=P

Then you would raid their drawer and took a smell and lick thier panties???!!! Like Main did to Misha in chapter 1.

...i'm no pervert...

Sorry if I accidentally offended you, I was just making fun of your statement there.

Please forgive me.

relax^^; i know that you are joking.

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H@_P3 · Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 8:10 am Post subject:

Dexas wrote:

H@_P3 wrote:

And isn't that Cantor the original Reyvateil in your fic that sings the mind controlling hymn? How did she ended up here?

Think about it for a few minutes~nya. The ONLY difference in this universe is that Falss wasn't there to screw over everyone's lives.

Yeah... I know...
But damn, Falss did screw people's lives that badly to turn Cantor into a psychotic reyvateil...

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Goober · Joined: 31 Mar 2009 Posts: 8

Well...after two long nights I managed to read everything, and I'm downloading the final chapter now...

The level of sheer epic-nessness is off the chart.

Mind = blown

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**Deciare** · Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 3:24 am Post subject:

Would you like to offer your feedback to the overall thoughts thread? I'm sure Dexas would love to hear from you. Thank you~

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Goober · Joined: 31 Mar 2009 Posts: 8

I'll post something later tonight, after I've had some time to colect my thoughts and watch the final chapter..

But for now, I can say i liked the way it was released in parts, and the readers were given at least some control over some of the first part of the story.

I can only imagine the suspense I'd have been in during some parts of the story if I had actually been around here to read it as the chapters were released.

MoPo25 · Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 3:41 am Post subject:

Good luck Goober-san~~!

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